Alright, there are a few things that jumped out at me:
- General: the size of the pack is kinda big for the quantity of maps it has. I suggest looping your music more efficiently (looking at LILY06 on that, too.)
- LIL01: You should probably have some cloud platforms going up from the Gravity Hold platform so that players that reach there have a chance to go back if they ran out of Item 2.
- LIL02: There's a teleporter that makes players face a wall when used, and it also has a wrong texture. Here's a screenie.
- LIL04: The music sounds incredibly muffled.
Nothing else at the moment. LIL03 and 06 were great, though.The sparkles and recolored Shade Man rocks look fantastic. I wish I was able to decorate half as good as these maps look, too.