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Mega Man 8-bit Deathmatch => Projects & Creative => Maps => Topic started by: lorbog on June 03, 2013, 03:19:51 AM

Title: Lorbog's Maps UPDATE (June 5, 13)
Post by: lorbog on June 03, 2013, 03:19:51 AM

Well these are my my maps. Tell me what you think.


Simulation

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My first map :) (has a ship)
Music from here: http://www.nosoapradio.us/
Screenshots:

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(http://i.imgur.com/JbgbfrX.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/LzhSnQQ.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/Br0VAp9.png)

Download: http://camoy.sdf.org/wads/files/testmap_1.wad

School

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A map based on the layout of my school. (I made this just to put this song in it)
Song: (play the map first i want it to be a surprise :D) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hnL-XglIhD0
Screenshots: Coming soon...

Download: http://camoy.sdf.org/wads/files/school.wad

Boo's Mansion

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Coming Soon...

Title: Re: Lorbog's Maps UPDATE (June 5, 13)
Post by: Chauer on June 06, 2013, 02:28:52 PM

OK, I'll try to criticise these.
Let's start with Simulation.
What we have here is a test map, and it does a pretty good testing job, but it's nothing more than a test.

-The narrow maze thing hinders the fast-paced deathmatch
-The ladders' graphic isn't appropiate
-ARGH GOD WHY DOES ANYONE NEED A 1200 HIGH SECTOR
-There's a large number of independent and teleporter-connected places, which turns any deathmatch weird
-You can go out of the window
-The textures are monotonous(everywhere), look out of place(the ship) or are just plain missing(a pillar, the window)
-The map is absurdly large, which turns any deathmatch into some kind of a hide-and-seek game
-The clock-trees have no collision
-The music. Please, at least insert a chiptune track.
-I doubt the Homing Sniper area should have wind instead of conveyor belts
-The checkered design was kinda pointless
-Try adding the sectordamage types
-I see you use zero height sectors for walls. Try removing the unneeded sectors.
-Try using straight lines instead of curves
-The boat sector is huge and has lots of unused space.
-The deadly sector in the maze should have a warning it's dangerous

About the pillar:
Somewhy in Zandronum, if a single texture of a linedef is seen, it's always the middle one.

The school map has no point in my opinion. The classrooms and the corridors are bad fighting spaces, the tables offer a near-infinite amount of health.

Title: Re: Lorbog's Maps UPDATE (June 5, 13)
Post by: lorbog on June 06, 2013, 09:51:33 PM

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad someone commented on this :D

Title: Re: Lorbog's Maps UPDATE (June 5, 13)
Post by: Samuel on June 11, 2016, 09:19:20 PM

Dear sir, might you be interested in reuploading the download links to your maps?
Dear heavens, I cannot find them anywhere! I'd really like to enjoy them, so please heed my request.