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December 21, 2010, 06:17:59 PM
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Offline Jennifer

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New Map
« on: December 21, 2010, 06:17:59 PM »
I Made this in my Free time in Doom builder.It's a small Arena With Various Weapons at your disposal.Enjoy.

Electric Wily Download:
http://www.mediafire.com/?nevohjw4lwmd341

Screenshots to come later.

December 21, 2010, 07:02:20 PM
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Re: New Map
« Reply #1 on: December 21, 2010, 07:02:20 PM »
I'm about to test this and if I find out it''s symmetrical...

Also, it's nice to tell us the map name so we know it without having to look into the .wad.

Guys' it's FSDM01


Ok, Just played it. You need more texture variations and the map itself looks really bland. Try and add more decorations into the wall and maybe even windows.

This also lacks a skybox so the sky is really 1 flat murky cyan colour... not very good.

Also, the item placement, you need to scatter more ammo and health around. If you're skilled, you shouldn't have to die but when there's no health around then there's no choice. Also, the only inventory item is Bass buster. Tango roll looks pretty fun in this environment.

Lastly, obstacles. There are no obstacles in this map whatsoever. It's ok but it would be nice to have at least 1 deathpit. I'm not saying all maps need deathpits but sometimes the map is boring without one.

What's with the angled lines? I know you can have them in MM8BDM but this doesn't even try and be discrete about it.


Conclusion: Good start with major flaws. The layout is pretty boring and uninspired. Keep practising though, don't give up.

December 21, 2010, 09:28:49 PM
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Re: New Map
« Reply #2 on: December 21, 2010, 09:28:49 PM »
Thanks For the constructive Criticism.

December 22, 2010, 05:39:48 AM
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Re: New Map
« Reply #3 on: December 22, 2010, 05:39:48 AM »
So.... when are you posting the screenshots?

December 22, 2010, 05:48:34 AM
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Re: New Map
« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2010, 05:48:34 AM »
in the morning.Too tired to do it now.