Oops, meant to comment on this when I first saw it.
For the creepypasta vid - it's nice! I can't say much about the acting or whatnot since I'm not familiar judging that. Instead I'll give you some thoughts I had about the script (plot or whatever).
GHOST used curse!!
1) The BEN stuff was unnecessary. I don't think anyone unfamiliar with BEN would understand the reference... Most of the references to BEN could've been left out no problem. The focus should be on Black, not as much on BEN.
2) Repeating the scene at the end... I dunno, I didn't understand it. It wasn't clear whether the whole thing just starts over again, whether it happens to someone else, or if it was a "flash back" or sorts (this is unlikely I know). It's painful because I was waiting for a stinger!! No delivery here. D: (no, the flash after the credits does not count. I'm talking about a plot-stinger.)
3) The "cartridge knows your real name!11" bit might've been too much of a stretch. (The other liberties I felt were justified; not really this one. This is more preference of course.)
So yeah, we entered Creepy Pasta into the University of Tulsa Spring Film Festival 2012. And here's a video documenting some of the craziness prior and during it (Note that from around 1:00-9:30 is the actual film in the theater, so if you've seen it before you can skip over that):
And in case you don't want to watch the video to find out the result, I'll spoiler it below:
We won the Best Film Award~