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Title: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 01, 2011, 01:40:05 AM
This was approved by Epic Kirby, he said so himself:

[9:35:01 PM] Captain Freeman of Epic City: I Epic Kirby aprove of this spinoff (unless I die)

This is a spinoff based off of EK's original story, basically using the same characters (I hope you guys don't mind that, and if you do alert me soon so I don't accidentally force you into this.) and will act sort of as an "Alternate Timeline" to the original. Written by me, and will be helped by the same team as EK has, including Epic Kirby himself.

So let's get this party started, with the beginning chapter part thing/prologue. (which will probably be short compared to later chapters)

PROLOGUE
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Chapter 1 - Open
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Chapter 2 - Reveal
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Chapter 3 - Create
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Chapter 4 - Fly
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Chapter 5 Part 1 - Fight
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Chapter 5 Part 2 - Flight
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Chapter 6 - Write
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Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Magnet Dood on October 01, 2011, 01:42:05 AM
I don't want Dan Jenkins in this one! He must be unique!

Give me Gravity Man instead. (Epic Kirby won't let me use him. -_-)
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 01, 2011, 01:44:17 AM
Aight

Give me a description thingy of your Gravity Man and I'll use that instead (even though I was kinda excited to use Boy Scout :<)
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 01, 2011, 01:45:14 AM
Jonathan?

Whatever floats the boat of spinoffs.

I didn't know such a boat existed.
Also sadly we don't get to see another tale of the Murderous Boy Scout.
Oh well.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Magnet Dood on October 01, 2011, 01:48:33 AM
Dan Jenkins must be uniqueeeeeee

Gravity Man
Appearence: Well, jesus, he's Gravity Man do I need to post a pic or sumthin?
Powerzzzz: He has his Gravity Buster, of course. In regualar rooms, he can change gravity so people fight on the ceiling. He can also use his Ghold of epic proportions, and he can use the Gravity Squeeze. It's basically when tons of Gs come on you, and you are either pushed sideways or down onto the ground.

Any other shtuff: He is one of the greatest robot masters ever. Amen.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 01, 2011, 01:49:10 AM
Quote from: "Star Dood"
Dan Jenkins must be uniqueeeeeee

Gravity Man
Appearence: Well, jesus, he's Gravity Man do I need to post a pic or sumthin?
Powerzzzz: He has his Gravity Buster, of course. In regualar rooms, he can change gravity so people fight on the ceiling. He can also use his Ghold of epic proportions, and he can use the Gravity Squeeze. It's basically when tons of Gs come on you, and you are either pushed sideways or down onto the ground.

Any other shtuff: He is one of the greatest robot masters ever. Amen.

Star Dood! Gravity Man needs a personality!
He's just a boss in the game.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: CHAOS_FANTAZY on October 01, 2011, 01:49:40 AM
Hmm...I have ten OCs, which one should I shamelessly insert into this one?  Hmmm...
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Tesseractal on October 01, 2011, 01:52:12 AM
Quote from: "Epic Kirby"
Jonathan?

Whatever floats the boat of spinoffs.

I didn't know such a boat existed.
Also sadly we don't get to see another tale of the Murderous Boy Scout.
Oh well.
That name is a reference, accidental or not. Lulz.

Anyway, I guess this will be written in the same format (Chapter, X Rounds, 1 Fight/Round, etc.?) I'm also curious as to who the "team" is.
Title: Reboot go die
Post by: Kenkoru on October 01, 2011, 01:56:32 AM
I hate you so much
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Magnet Dood on October 01, 2011, 01:59:12 AM
Doh, of course:

Personality: He's a little curt, but very smart. He's often very proud of himself, which is why he smirks often.
Title: Ken ilu~
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 01, 2011, 01:59:49 AM
Actually, it will be in just regular chapters, since this one won't focus on the tourney aspect as much.

Also, I guess it's ok to add some characters, just don't add too much, and I'll probably close character additions soon because unlike Epic Kirby I can't hold all of these characters, and I'll still be using the characters from the original.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 01, 2011, 02:02:49 AM
I'm all about the death. and he's all about the romance novel.

Ok that was a bad analogy.


I just prefer focusing on the battles and have the epilogues cover mostly everything else.
and is needed one or two prologues.
Title: jonathan go back to your soup bowl
Post by: Tesseractal on October 01, 2011, 02:18:23 AM
Hahaha, I understood that analogy fine. Battles are definitely more exciting and you probably have a lot more to work with (most people will go all-over 9000 for their power levels, leaving little to spare for personalities). Of course, it's also personal preference. (I'm going to go on a limb and guess you like shonen animes over other genres? If you watch anime, that is.) It's also good because if Reboot writes traditional chapter style, it'll differentiate the spinoff a good deal more. Wins for everyone. (except jonathan lulz).

Still curious about that team. (Please tell me CF is on it, at least. >.>)
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: LlamaHombre on October 01, 2011, 02:19:51 AM
I wouldn't mind being in both! If there's anything I need to modify to LabadaHorde for this one, lemme know.
Title: Re: jonathan go back to your soup bowl
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 01, 2011, 02:24:46 AM
Quote from: "Ice-IX"
Hahaha, I understood that analogy fine. Battles are definitely more exciting and you probably have a lot more to work with (most people will go all-over 9000 for their power levels, leaving little to spare for personalities). Of course, it's also personal preference. (I'm going to go on a limb and guess you like shonen animes over other genres? If you watch anime, that is.) It's also good because if Reboot writes traditional chapter style, it'll differentiate the spinoff a good deal more. Wins for everyone. (except jonathan lulz).

Still curious about that team. (Please tell me CF is on it, at least. >.>)

Actually I don't watch anime at all.
In fact I rarely watch anything.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 01, 2011, 02:36:25 AM
New chapter.

Enjoy
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: xColdxFusionx on October 01, 2011, 02:41:56 AM
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Seriously, this story does not make sense to me

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Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 01, 2011, 02:44:03 AM
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Title: Why aren't you dead yet
Post by: Kenkoru on October 01, 2011, 02:45:46 AM
Quote from: "Kenkoru"
I hate you so much
This applies more and more every day
Title: Most people won't get this unless they've seen Llama's vid.
Post by: Tesseractal on October 01, 2011, 03:05:39 AM
You have attempted to pass a largely humorous story off as a serious. I lol'd hard.
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Seriously, this story does not make sense to me
But you explained it just above!
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Title: It's not my vid, Roc. It's Turbo's.
Post by: LlamaHombre on October 01, 2011, 03:09:18 AM
Ken died.

Not big surprise.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 01, 2011, 12:48:53 PM
Don't you worry, this is one of those stories that make more sense as we progress.

Also he's been stranded in a desert with no food, no water, and no one to even talk to. Plus he was going pretty insane as well. I don't see why he wouldn't die.


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Title: this topic makes no sense! aaaaaaaaaaah!
Post by: MasterXman on October 01, 2011, 01:00:31 PM
So let me get this straight...We have to Beat all the bosses again? add the same guys again or is it the same settings as before?
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 01, 2011, 01:47:14 PM
Quote from: "RebootRaeg"
Don't you worry, this is one of those stories that make more sense as we progress.

Also he's been stranded in a desert with no food, no water, and no one to even talk to. Plus he was going pretty insane as well. I don't see why he wouldn't die.


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Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: OZX on October 01, 2011, 03:30:43 PM
MORE WARS.

Name:Omegazerox12
Appearance:Same as the one in mmz3.
Personality:Kind, smart, and powerful.
Weapon of choice:THE ozx saber and ozx buster.OZX saber does very good damage.OZX buster is strong on charge shots.
Other note:He can teleport IF he's goin to get killed.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: -FiniteZero- on October 01, 2011, 03:34:01 PM
I'm thinking of whether to join this or not, though I don't think I would add myself in again.

Is it OK to use fancharacters-

Oh, wait, of course it is.

Thing is, If I do, it would end up being three, though only one actually can fight, if that's any better.

Is it aight if I do that?
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 01, 2011, 03:35:06 PM
I don't think you people need to write your characters down again.
I'm pretty sure Reboot is just looking at the description topic.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: xColdxFusionx on October 01, 2011, 07:37:17 PM
Quote from: "omegazerox12"
Name: Marty Stu

Fixed.

Please try to make more realistic characters (i.e. they have realistic personality/combat flaws). You'll have an easier time getting them into stories if you do. My advice is to always think of at least one negative trait and add it to the character. For example, Omega Zero could be a bit egotistical and constantly underestimate his foes. Or he could be bitter about his past. Or he could be irritable. ANYTHING other than "He's a perfect gentleman who can kill anyone just by looking at them."
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 01, 2011, 07:47:17 PM
What CF and EK said.

Gonna start working on the next chapters now.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Red on October 01, 2011, 07:49:18 PM
Dude, OZX is doing all he can so he does not die here.

if i recall, he has tried to

-Update his character to make him resurrect
-Making another one OP as fuck
-Making yet another one  OP as fuck
-Making one on the other war to make him teleport when he is about to die.

inb4 he dies on 2 chapter aheauheauheau
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 01, 2011, 09:09:00 PM
New chapter, woop woop woop.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: CHAOS_FANTAZY on October 01, 2011, 09:24:29 PM
TsuZero Labs, huh?
Not sure if should submit scientist character for you to use...
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 01, 2011, 09:46:34 PM
I'm secretly aware of what's going on.

So the only thing I can say is
TsuZero Labs-I don't know who is behind that. Not at all.

I didn't even know there would be a lab. Honest about that one.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Hallan Parva on October 02, 2011, 12:37:39 AM
Quote from: "RebootRaeg"
This is a spinoff based off of EK's original story, basically using the same characters (I hope you guys don't mind that, and if you do alert me soon so I don't accidentally force you into this.)
On the contrary. I encourage as much Oshiro as you can get your story-writing hands on. :cool:
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: TheAmazingImp on October 02, 2011, 01:16:48 AM
I made another spinoff, might wanna check it out. Please include MidnightTH or Chuck the fuck.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Ivory on October 02, 2011, 01:21:58 AM
No, there is no spinoff.

And again. I asked NOT to be in these stories. Please respect my wishes.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 02, 2011, 01:39:23 AM
I didn't "approve" (as one way to put it) of that spinoff

And since I can't comment on it on that topic I'll say it here.. The writing was short and kinda bad.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Bikdark on October 02, 2011, 05:07:12 AM
Quote from: "TheAmazingImp"
Please include MidnightTH
But you ARE MTH.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 04, 2011, 10:21:15 PM
Don't mind me, just updatin'.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: CHAOS_FANTAZY on October 05, 2011, 12:00:17 AM
Interesting.
Which is pretty much all I can say at this point, Mr. Enigma.

A; would it be safe to submit a different character, or have you got plans for one or both of the C_Fs?  'Cause the Door sounds almost exactly like the HUD.
B; if so, what would I need to fill out?
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 09, 2011, 02:02:06 AM
Late reply woops

I guess you can submit a character, but your C_F's would be ok for me. Plus, I can't really handle more characters like EK personally. You still can, though.
If you want, just fill the usual form.

Also update.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 09, 2011, 02:05:38 AM
It smells like plot in here.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Nostalgia on October 09, 2011, 02:53:08 AM
luli'mreallylatetothis

Name: Nostalgia
Personality: Tries to be friendly to everyone even if he doesn't like them. Doesn't have many friends but the few he has are very close to him. Pretty shy. Takes a lot for him to get angry, but when he does, he's pissed the fuck off. Trustworthy, loyal, and empathetic, but tormented inside. Can be sarcastic at times. Somewhat naive. Lazy. Loves rock and metal music.
Appearance: Kinda skinny, young,
Weapon of Choice: A butcher's knife, spiked baseball bat, propane torches.  :cool:  
Special Abilities: Limb regeneration (except for his head)
Other notes: Wears a welding mask in combat.
Title: Banking on the appearance of Roc's Creation. Doubtful, yes.
Post by: Tesseractal on October 10, 2011, 12:19:22 AM
Quote from: "RebootRaeg"
I guess you can submit a character, but your C_F's would be ok for me. Plus, I can't really handle more characters like EK personally.
I find this ironic if you consider what's happened so far as implication of parallel / multiple universes with different counterparts of each character, in theory creating more potential characters than EK's. (Potential being the key word here, as they could easily be not observed or killed off for dramatic effect. See First Chapter lulz.)

Anyway, glad to see this pick up again. I'm finding the plot interesting although perhaps chunked a bit much (e.g. larger segments at a time might be more filling). I look forward to seeing more character-personality revelations such as Raveman's that we witnessed.  :twisted:
Title: Re: Banking on the appearance of Roc's Creation. Doubtful, y
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 10, 2011, 12:29:16 AM
Quote from: "Ice-IX"
Quote from: "RebootRaeg"
I guess you can submit a character, but your C_F's would be ok for me. Plus, I can't really handle more characters like EK personally.
I find this ironic if you consider what's happened so far as implication of parallel / multiple universes with different counterparts of each character, in theory creating more potential characters than EK's. (Potential being the key word here, as they could easily be not observed or killed off for dramatic effect. See First Chapter lulz.)

Anyway, glad to see this pick up again. I'm finding the plot interesting although perhaps chunked a bit much (e.g. larger segments at a time might be more filling). I look forward to seeing more character-personality revelations such as Raveman's that we witnessed.  :twisted:
Yeah, that's kinda why I don't really need anymore characters.
Thanks for the comment, I'll work on that.
Feelin' like working on the next chapter soon, hoo boy
Title: Inb4 I don't want Travis in this
Post by: Jennifer on October 10, 2011, 11:20:15 AM
Hopefully I'm not too late, but I don't want Travis in the spinoff, please.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: xColdxFusionx on October 10, 2011, 11:41:19 PM
Oh, my~ This story is about to get interesting~
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 22, 2011, 01:07:57 AM
Oh right this thing still exists.

Boop update.
Title: Now there's two Elenas! Hyeszzzzzz
Post by: Tesseractal on October 22, 2011, 01:51:37 AM
Ah, glad to see this making a comeback. I appreciate the length of this chapter. Also one of my favorite characters.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 22, 2011, 02:04:58 AM
I honestly find it interesting that this story takes a more "interactive narrator" kinda feel to it. As Reboot is obviously commenting as he writes it. While I rarely add comment to the writing itself.

Also his grammar is so much better then mine.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 28, 2011, 11:27:55 PM
Hey, don't forget I make this.
Update, planning on making updates every Friday unless I stop being lazy one day.
Check it out.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 28, 2011, 11:58:28 PM
I'd like to say that we've decided that the both wars are connected...sorta.

The main idea is that things that happen in one story, happen in the other, until about a month before each war starts where the timeline splits.

Timeline A: My story, where TsuZero Labs never made the door.
Timeline B: This story, where TsuZero Labs did make the door.

This will actually be touched upon in my story, or this one. We don't know yet.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: OZX on October 29, 2011, 12:00:44 AM
In other words, tsuki lost in YOUR war, and tsuki secretly made the door so he could get revenge.

Solved so fast.i win.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 29, 2011, 12:01:45 AM
Quote from: "omegazerox12"
In other words, tsuki lost in YOUR war, and tsuki secretly made the door so he could get revenge.

Solved so fast.i win.

Not at all.

The wars (if the timelines were still connected) happen at the same time. The Tsuki you've been seeing is a different Tsuki.
Cause there's two dimensions.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: OZX on October 29, 2011, 12:02:56 AM
SO he could actually execute better then the one in your dimension lawl.
Title: Happy Elena is yummy. Reboot delivers.
Post by: Tesseractal on October 29, 2011, 12:05:13 AM
This was a rather nice read. Easy to follow, characters presented in a sympathetic / believable way. Please do continue.

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As for the connection between stories, I was under the fair impression that the door leads to the universe depicted in EK's version.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 29, 2011, 12:05:53 AM
It does.

I might have mis-typed that. but it does.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on October 29, 2011, 02:26:49 AM
Update's not done yet. (http://i768.photobucket.com/albums/xx327/Kirb_of_Derp/spinoff1.png)

Now it is. I'll be doing this every few chapters or so I guess.
Title: Re: Happy Elena is yummy. Reboot delivers.
Post by: Dr. Freeman on October 29, 2011, 02:28:13 AM
Quote from: "Ice-IX"
This was a rather nice read. Easy to follow, characters presented in a sympathetic / believable way. Please do continue.

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Title: Sirene Coulomb - Character Submission
Post by: Tesseractal on November 12, 2011, 12:30:43 AM
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Since I haven't seen much happen here lately, I felt like submitting this character. I would like this character to replace Auroria Borealis in this story (unless you have any desire to use both). The fighting style, at the least, should be a bit easier to work with here. Part of the design I actually worked around the concept of the two timelines being present in the story - and if that's confusing in any bit, I can clarify what I mean some more. If nothing more hopefully this at least creates some interest in this story again.  :cool:
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Mendez on November 16, 2011, 12:21:44 AM
So I wrote a guest chapter because I was bored. Hopefully, you guys don't mind.
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: RebootRaeg on November 16, 2011, 01:20:02 AM
remember when this was updated me neither.

I did not write the entirety of this chapter, I had someone write most of it.
Maybe you can figure out who wrote it I dunno
Title: Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
Post by: Dr. Freeman on November 16, 2011, 02:30:34 AM
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