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General => Anything Goes => Topic started by: Jman on October 15, 2012, 03:34:17 AM

Title: A little something I'm working on
Post by: Jman on October 15, 2012, 03:34:17 AM
There's a short novel I'm working on that I may make into an action-adventure game in the future if I go into game development. Feedback is appreciated! I'll gladly take suggestions as to where the novel will go in direction if I get stuck in writing.

Prologue - The 6 Gods
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Title: Re: A little something I'm working on
Post by: D25 on October 20, 2012, 05:55:15 AM
Very good. You wrote this well. The quality is quite nice, good enough to be a published book. Of course, it is only the first chapter. But either way, very good.
Title: Re: A little something I'm working on
Post by: Jman on October 20, 2012, 10:43:57 PM
It's more like an intro than chapter 1. But I guess you could put it that way. Thank you!