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August 24, 2011, 01:27:36 AM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Don't judge by looks... (Round 2, Chapte
« Reply #105 on: August 24, 2011, 01:27:36 AM »
Quote from: "CHAOS_FANTAZY"
I'm still led to believe I'm dead right now.  Even if I somehow fell out of the HUD, where the hell am I now?

Also, I bet 25 posts on KirbySonic dying.

Also, I've gotta fight Cold sometime.  CF against CF gogogo!

Your HUD has to have a bottom somewhere!
And that's all I'm saying.

August 24, 2011, 01:41:50 AM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Don't judge by looks... (Round 2, Chapte
« Reply #106 on: August 24, 2011, 01:41:50 AM »
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Quote from: "CHAOS_FANTAZY"
I'm still led to believe I'm dead right now.  Even if I somehow fell out of the HUD, where the hell am I now?

Also, I bet 25 posts on KirbySonic dying.

Also, I've gotta fight Cold sometime.  CF against CF gogogo!

Your HUD has to have a bottom somewhere!
And that's all I'm saying.

His Plot Shield broke the fall.

August 24, 2011, 01:43:56 AM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Don't judge by looks... (Round 2, Chapte
« Reply #107 on: August 24, 2011, 01:43:56 AM »
Quote from: "xColdxFusionx"
Quote from: "Epic Kirby"
Quote from: "CHAOS_FANTAZY"
I'm still led to believe I'm dead right now.  Even if I somehow fell out of the HUD, where the hell am I now?

Also, I bet 25 posts on KirbySonic dying.

Also, I've gotta fight Cold sometime.  CF against CF gogogo!

Your HUD has to have a bottom somewhere!
And that's all I'm saying.

His Plot Shield broke the fall.

I was going more for, he manipulated some magic energy thing to make the fall less painful.

August 24, 2011, 01:54:34 AM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Don't judge by looks... (Round 2, Chapte
« Reply #108 on: August 24, 2011, 01:54:34 AM »
make the next chapter about how he ended up after falling and if he gets out

August 24, 2011, 02:17:55 AM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Don't judge by looks... (Round 2, Chapte
« Reply #109 on: August 24, 2011, 02:17:55 AM »
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make the next chapter about how he ended up after falling and if he gets out
Uhhh,just no Trollman.

August 24, 2011, 02:23:48 AM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Don't judge by looks... (Round 2, Chapte
« Reply #110 on: August 24, 2011, 02:23:48 AM »
Yeah, some talking about where I am/I'm going to/I'm falling to isn't worthy of its own chapter.  I'd add it as a footnote when Bikdark, or the HUD, or Sand Canyon or something comes up in conversation.

Also, I think we went over this in a PM, EK.  My character's magic isn't good enough to be used effectively in a situation like this.
It would, however, be a good time to use the other thing we talked about.  Something like...
- CF pulls out some long range-weapon
- CF spins said weapon above his head
- The force created by this action has a "helicopter" effect
- CF's fall slows to a more manageable pace

August 24, 2011, 01:25:36 PM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Don't judge by looks... (Round 2, Chapte
« Reply #111 on: August 24, 2011, 01:25:36 PM »
STOP WRITING
You're really churning out these chapters, huh? I better get to work on that character template!

August 24, 2011, 05:38:37 PM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Battle for Training (Round 2, Chapter 2)
« Reply #112 on: August 24, 2011, 05:38:37 PM »
New chapter is out. Which is a bit nicer after the dark opening to this round.

August 24, 2011, 06:29:53 PM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Battle for Training (Round 2, Chapter 2)
« Reply #113 on: August 24, 2011, 06:29:53 PM »
Wow, Ventus sure pwned Savior.

August 24, 2011, 06:44:33 PM
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« Reply #114 on: August 24, 2011, 06:44:33 PM »
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August 24, 2011, 08:08:18 PM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Battle for Training (Round 2, Chapter 2)
« Reply #115 on: August 24, 2011, 08:08:18 PM »
LKHFE;LF;SBJER;LJBFGSN'EFBS;KJF;

Man, that was awesome and not at all because I was pro!  I'm really looking forward to the next chapter now  :D

August 24, 2011, 08:20:38 PM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Battle for Training (Round 2, Chapter 2)
« Reply #116 on: August 24, 2011, 08:20:38 PM »
At least I didn't die! Just thrown into the sea tryin' to come back, not a bad start...
"GG" Sora XD!!!
Remember with electricity, ya have to be very creative to use it to the best of its extent. I could of given the keyblade a negative charge and call a positive charge from the sky, so I will have 100% accuracy for it to hit. That's one example of usin' thunder at its finest.

Nice story so far! Keep it up!

August 24, 2011, 08:25:16 PM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Battle for Training (Round 2, Chapter 2)
« Reply #117 on: August 24, 2011, 08:25:16 PM »
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At least I didn't die! "GG" Sora XD!!!
Remember with electricity, ya have to be very creative to use it to the best of its extent. I could of given the keyblade a negative charge and call a positive charge from the sky, so I will have 100% accuracy for it to hit. That's one example of usin' thunder at its finest.

Nice story so far! Keep it up!

Control of electricity is the trickiest power ever. You have to decide whether it's traditional "electricity" (lightning, electric currents) or "electric charges" (Congrats, you now rule over everything.)

And you also have to decide where the limit is; even someone with traditional "electricity" can alter electric currents in someone's body to take control of their actions.

...Yeah, "control of electricity" is the trickiest power ever.

August 24, 2011, 08:28:17 PM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Battle for Training (Round 2, Chapter 2)
« Reply #118 on: August 24, 2011, 08:28:17 PM »
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At least I didn't die! Just thrown into the sea tryin' to come back, not a bad start...
"GG" Sora XD!!!
Remember with electricity, ya have to be very creative to use it to the best of its extent. I could of given the keyblade a negative charge and call a positive charge from the sky, so I will have 100% accuracy for it to hit. That's one example of usin' thunder at its finest.


Yep, you're not exactly dead yet. But I doubt you will have a grudge against him.

Electricity is a pain to write for. No one else use it!

August 24, 2011, 08:38:36 PM
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Re: Cutstuff "War": Battle for Training (Round 2, Chapter 2)
« Reply #119 on: August 24, 2011, 08:38:36 PM »
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Control of electricity is the trickiest power ever. You have to decide whether it's traditional "electricity" (lightning, electric currents) or "electric charges" (Congrats, you now rule over everything.)
If ya ran a current through a piece of metal it'd be magnetized temporarily, which also makes it a lot more attractive to certain charges. I suppose my powers kind fall under both "traditional" and "charges". I can't give wood a negative charge, because wood is a bad conductor so that's one way that chargin' up won't work. Say if we fought on a metal bridge, then Sora(Ventus) would have been in a heck of a lot more trouble since electricity there is easier to manipulate. What I would of done there would be the give the bridge a charge and attempt to give him another charge, and there static electricity takes over attractin' Sora onto the ground. Of course the charges will wear off after time.

Simple science at work, I'd say.


And you also have to decide where the limit is; even someone with traditional "electricity" can alter electric currents in someone's body to take control of their actions.
That'd fall under mind control, which is out of my limits. Brain waves move in certain patterns, I'm no doctor so there's no way that I would know what pattern it would be in. Although it is true that a jolt can trigger a movement in the muscle (my 9th grade science teacher demo'd that on himself to the class), but again I have to have exact patterns for total control of their actions.

...Yeah, "control of electricity" is the trickiest power ever.


My response to ya.

Also Epic Kirby, the only thin' that I didn't like was my character didn't speak like I do! D: