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October 10, 2011, 11:20:15 AM
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Inb4 I don't want Travis in this
« Reply #45 on: October 10, 2011, 11:20:15 AM »
Hopefully I'm not too late, but I don't want Travis in the spinoff, please.

October 10, 2011, 11:41:19 PM
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Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
« Reply #46 on: October 10, 2011, 11:41:19 PM »
Oh, my~ This story is about to get interesting~

October 22, 2011, 01:07:57 AM
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Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
« Reply #47 on: October 22, 2011, 01:07:57 AM »
Oh right this thing still exists.

Boop update.

October 22, 2011, 01:51:37 AM
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Now there's two Elenas! Hyeszzzzzz
« Reply #48 on: October 22, 2011, 01:51:37 AM »
Ah, glad to see this making a comeback. I appreciate the length of this chapter. Also one of my favorite characters.

October 22, 2011, 02:04:58 AM
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Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
« Reply #49 on: October 22, 2011, 02:04:58 AM »
I honestly find it interesting that this story takes a more "interactive narrator" kinda feel to it. As Reboot is obviously commenting as he writes it. While I rarely add comment to the writing itself.

Also his grammar is so much better then mine.

October 28, 2011, 11:27:55 PM
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Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
« Reply #50 on: October 28, 2011, 11:27:55 PM »
Hey, don't forget I make this.
Update, planning on making updates every Friday unless I stop being lazy one day.
Check it out.

October 28, 2011, 11:58:28 PM
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Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
« Reply #51 on: October 28, 2011, 11:58:28 PM »
I'd like to say that we've decided that the both wars are connected...sorta.

The main idea is that things that happen in one story, happen in the other, until about a month before each war starts where the timeline splits.

Timeline A: My story, where TsuZero Labs never made the door.
Timeline B: This story, where TsuZero Labs did make the door.

This will actually be touched upon in my story, or this one. We don't know yet.

October 29, 2011, 12:00:44 AM
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« Reply #52 on: October 29, 2011, 12:00:44 AM »
In other words, tsuki lost in YOUR war, and tsuki secretly made the door so he could get revenge.

Solved so fast.i win.

October 29, 2011, 12:01:45 AM
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Re: CutStuff "War" UNNAMED SPINOFF
« Reply #53 on: October 29, 2011, 12:01:45 AM »
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In other words, tsuki lost in YOUR war, and tsuki secretly made the door so he could get revenge.

Solved so fast.i win.

Not at all.

The wars (if the timelines were still connected) happen at the same time. The Tsuki you've been seeing is a different Tsuki.
Cause there's two dimensions.

October 29, 2011, 12:02:56 AM
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« Reply #54 on: October 29, 2011, 12:02:56 AM »
SO he could actually execute better then the one in your dimension lawl.

October 29, 2011, 12:05:13 AM
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« Reply #55 on: October 29, 2011, 12:05:13 AM »
This was a rather nice read. Easy to follow, characters presented in a sympathetic / believable way. Please do continue.

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As for the connection between stories, I was under the fair impression that the door leads to the universe depicted in EK's version.

October 29, 2011, 12:05:53 AM
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« Reply #56 on: October 29, 2011, 12:05:53 AM »
It does.

I might have mis-typed that. but it does.

October 29, 2011, 02:26:49 AM
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« Reply #57 on: October 29, 2011, 02:26:49 AM »
Update's not done yet.

Now it is. I'll be doing this every few chapters or so I guess.

October 29, 2011, 02:28:13 AM
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« Reply #58 on: October 29, 2011, 02:28:13 AM »
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This was a rather nice read. Easy to follow, characters presented in a sympathetic / believable way. Please do continue.

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November 12, 2011, 12:30:43 AM
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Sirene Coulomb - Character Submission
« Reply #59 on: November 12, 2011, 12:30:43 AM »
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Since I haven't seen much happen here lately, I felt like submitting this character. I would like this character to replace Auroria Borealis in this story (unless you have any desire to use both). The fighting style, at the least, should be a bit easier to work with here. Part of the design I actually worked around the concept of the two timelines being present in the story - and if that's confusing in any bit, I can clarify what I mean some more. If nothing more hopefully this at least creates some interest in this story again.  :cool: