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December 09, 2011, 10:42:45 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation
« Reply #315 on: December 09, 2011, 10:42:45 AM »
OOC: Is this thing dying already? SOMEONE POST SOMETHING ALREADY!!! PLEASE!!! BEFORE DEATH!!!

December 09, 2011, 11:43:47 PM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation
« Reply #316 on: December 09, 2011, 11:43:47 PM »
Eh this topic. I lost my tastes to the topic, aka I quit. Seriously.

December 10, 2011, 12:37:49 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #317 on: December 10, 2011, 12:37:49 AM »
(Well, I can't really continue the story if no one else posts...*sniffle* *sniffle* it's gonna die!!!)

December 10, 2011, 12:38:58 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #318 on: December 10, 2011, 12:38:58 AM »
(I want to continue it, I'm just waiting for whoever controls Quick Man.)

Rythem wanted to chase the UFO, but felt the others could handle it.

December 10, 2011, 12:50:51 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #319 on: December 10, 2011, 12:50:51 AM »
((I don't even know where Pharaoh went at this point.

...Let's just assume he flew away from the island because he didn't have time to reach the boat.))

December 10, 2011, 03:06:52 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #320 on: December 10, 2011, 03:06:52 AM »
I saw this coming as soon as another topic was made.
The problem with this RP is it's pretty much a continuance on the previous one, and it doesn't seem to have a plot other than "X person(s) is evul, destroy him." Not very original after the what, last two times this was done? (ex: Coda, Omegus. I personally thought the Coda arc was fine compared to the rest >_>) Plus, due to the fact that there really isn't a plot, the entire flow of the story is kinda crashy, most of them battle after battle. It's like minor villain after minor villain, and most of them don't have much of an interesting quirk or personality. Plus most of the battles are kinda meh-ish, and sorta short.
The second thing that's wrong is that this RP seems to be lacking in quality. I really don't see any personality in the characters: Most of them seem to base off of the same personality, IMO. Most of this along wih other factors seemed to have created disinterest in some of the more interesting people that used to be here (Llama, Donutyoshi, possibly Star Dood, me included).
 This is just my opinion, from what I've seen of this topic from what I've (tried to) read. Just my two cents, really.

December 10, 2011, 03:10:29 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #321 on: December 10, 2011, 03:10:29 AM »
But yet, when something different ends up added in, besides new villains and people involved in battles, people get flamed. Talking from personal experience.

December 10, 2011, 03:15:15 AM
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« Reply #322 on: December 10, 2011, 03:15:15 AM »
Well, there is a difference between something new and different, and when that thing is overused a lot in the story. Then it starts to get old and uninteresting, and that can also contribute to the crashy flow of a story (aka it ruins the tension or slows it down a bit too much).

December 10, 2011, 03:39:02 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #323 on: December 10, 2011, 03:39:02 AM »
Quickman looked towards Wily Castle to see Rythem standing at the entrance...but where was everyone else?
"We gotta get going, guys. Something's fishy. Come on."

Quickman took off towards Wily Castle.

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Quickman finally arrived and saw Rythem."Hey. What's going on? Where's the others?" Rythem pointed and Quickman saw a distance away the Robot Masters fighting a Tricastle, a Lion Coin, and Wily's UFO. "Oooo, crap."

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BOOM! "Shit, this thing just doesn't give up, does it?" Napalmman was blasting away at the Lion Coin, but it just wouldn't die. Napalmman thought. There had to be a weak spot SOMEwhere. Hmmmmm......Napalmman saw the Lion Coin dispatch 2 more mini Lion Coins. "That's it!" Napalmman waited for the hatch to reopen. Just a little more.....Now! "SUCK NAPALM, KITTY!" Napalmman took the shot at the Mini-Coin Dispenser and the coin roared and exploded into a million pieces. "Boy, I love the smell of napalm in the morning!"

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Geminiman was fighting Wily in his skull suit while the UFO was on autopilot. "GYAHAHAHAHA! You can't be me! I'm your maker! I know your secrets."Wily's suit turned to a notorious shade of green. "Damn. Gyroman, I'm gonna need some backup." The UFO was blasting away at Gyroman, though. It looked like Geminiman's end...

December 10, 2011, 03:42:35 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #324 on: December 10, 2011, 03:42:35 AM »
(>_< Don't control my characters.)

When Quick Man arrived and asked what was going on, Rythem shrugged.

Rythem: Find out for yourself.

December 10, 2011, 03:46:33 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #325 on: December 10, 2011, 03:46:33 AM »
Pumpman clapped as Napalm had killed the mini-boss.
"Great job! Now lets find Wily, I have a bone to pick with him..."
Pumpman pumped his Water Shield, causing a splash in the dungeon.

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Heatman ran besides Quickman and saw Rythem.

"Now that we rescued a fellow ally, lets kick Wily's ass!!"
Heatman punched his hands together, forming flames in his palms.

December 10, 2011, 10:54:23 AM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #326 on: December 10, 2011, 10:54:23 AM »
Gyroman was firing at the UFO when he heard gemini
"Hold on Gemini!"
Gyroman turned and shot a few shots a wily and then turned back to the UFO.

December 10, 2011, 04:50:49 PM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #327 on: December 10, 2011, 04:50:49 PM »
"AAAACKK!!!!" Wily was pummeled by gyro attacks and fell down. "Now's my chance. Gemini Clone Morph!" Gemini2 popped out of Gemini1. They aimed their busters and blasted Wily's suit until Wily was on the floor panting. Gemini1 & 2: "It's over, Wily." They beamed out with Wily and destroyed the UFO. Gemini1:"Guys! We got Wily! Let's go!"

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Napalmman saw the UFO crash into the fortress's mainframe and the fortress started exploding. He looked at Skullman and Bass, who were still fighting the endless hoards of enemies. "Hey! Are you guys blind? We gotta get the hell out!"

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Quickman saw the explosions. "Oh, no. I'm going in, Heatman. Maybe I can run some of them out. They'll never make it on their own."

December 10, 2011, 05:21:13 PM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #328 on: December 10, 2011, 05:21:13 PM »
"You guys have fun. We're going to save time and leave now"

With that, Bass and Skull Man beamed out.

"Wait for me Napalm! Where did Air Man go?"

Mega Man followed Napalm.
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Air Man had left a while ago. He needed to find Wave Man, with or without the help of Gemini Man.

"I'll find ye, wherever ye may be Wave Man!"

December 10, 2011, 05:38:41 PM
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Re: Roleplay Topic - The 4th Generation (Donutyoshi Quits)
« Reply #329 on: December 10, 2011, 05:38:41 PM »
ZOOM! Quickman grabbed Megaman by the waist and ran out. "Sorry, Napalmman, but you're a bit too.....bulky." "Uh-huh. You callin' me fat?" "Nononononono, not at all. It's just that you're a tank and tanks are heavy.""Surrrrrrrrree, yea. Let's get going."

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Gemini1: "Damnit, Airman, where are you?" Gemini1 was searching for Airman everywhere. "He's too smart to have been caught in that explosion...hmmmmm...." Gemini1 turned to his brother. "Any ideas?" Gemini2 thought for awhile, then his eyes got wide. He talked about finding Waveman, remember!?" Gemini1's eyes got wide, too."You're right! We'll have to stay together so we don't slow each other down if we want to catch him in time. Gemini2, unmorph!" Gemini2 stood still as if in a trance, then fused back with Geminiman. "Now let's go stop Airman!" Geminiman ran towards the foamy ocean...


OOC: Ummmm....who's gonna play Waveman?