SmashBro's Spriting Shenanigans

[Hallan Parva]

BEETLE JET.

(don't look at the horror avert your gaze)

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... I don't like it. I'm not very good at "original" designs.

Any suggestions on how to clean it up while still looking like a beetle?

[Korby]

Which direction is it supposed to be facing?

[Hallan Parva]

EXACTLY. I knew it was dicks.

Don't worry, I came here to upload the new version which I think is vastly improved.


BEETLE JET V2


The only problem is now it doesn't look like a fighter ship.

[Magnet Dood]

Neither does anything else.

[Korby]

If you told me which direction it was supposed to be facing, I would have told you my opinion. Now that I know that it's facing up, I prefer the old one.

[Hallan Parva]

... Huh?

What things do you like about the first one? What needs to go?

also @Star, that's because they're enemies whereas BEETLE JET is meant to be a player character.

... I just realized how misleading the thread title is.

[Korby]

It looks more like a jet, and a cooler player character. It's also more complex.

The wings need to be over the yellow band more so they don't look they're cut off by it, and if those are legs, they need to be under the body.

[Magnet Dood]

Oh.

Yeah, first one looks cooler. And cuter.

[Hallan Parva]

ICE QUEEN



give me constructive criticism

[Max]

Is that supposed to be a ship

Weird black/yellow stripe things need a purpose

Body seems to be underneath wings, so it should carry over to below the wings on the other side for consistency

Reminds me of a chao or a slime

[Hallan Parva]

at first I saw the username and was like "oh boy here we go"
but wow YD you really hit the mark in my opinion

Whew, you saved me! Thanks a bundle! *dispenses Blue Coin*


ICE QUEEN V2


sometimes simplicity is the best policy, plus it makes things look cleaner

also included is the alternate "troll" version

NIDO QUEEN V2

[Strange Metool]

at first I saw the username and was like "oh boy here we go"
but wow YD you really hit the mark in my opinion

Whew, you saved me! Thanks a bundle! *dispenses Blue Coin*


ICE QUEEN V2


sometimes simplicity is the best policy, plus it makes things look cleaner

also included is the alternate "troll" version

NIDO QUEEN V2

Now it looks like Chaos from Sonic Adventure.

[Hallan Parva]

you know you really didn't need to quote the entire post
especially since it's right above you

also do you have any suggestions or comments on the other sprites

[Magnet Dood]

>Nido Queen

Are you kidding?

Eh, looks OK I guess. Also you should make a U.F. Uh Oh that shoots lasers off of walls.

[Hallan Parva]

I told you it was the troll version!

Also, I like the way you think. That's not a bad idea.