Clay's skins *Update Clayton skin*

[Clayton]

Updated my old fire sprites for new ones, also did a little tweaking on the colors and fixes on the actual skin. download if you want....

Also, I'm leaving my old skins for download.

Clayton


http://www.mediafire.com/download/tgo4u74stgy41hi/Clayton.pk3

Smeargle


http://www.mediafire.com/?ck8gw5hc5g68y4t

Boomerang Bro.  


http://www.mediafire.com/?76tsuku39vxnu1y

Hammer Bro.


http://www.mediafire.com/?o15q7398hukgxsn

Fire Bro.


http://www.mediafire.com/?gx5xuccbzfc35xv

Sledge Bro.


http://www.mediafire.com/?o04wt42kwz8sb2w

[Hallan Parva]

hey

hey

hey guy

I have some feedback



it's called "post screenshots or nobody will even bother with this"

[Red]

take a look at ks's skin thread, now, don't be like him please.

[Clayton]

hey

hey

hey guy

I have some feedback



it's called "post screenshots or nobody will even bother with this"

ok, i put a picture. sorry about that

[Red]

looks like an edit... and a very bad one at that

[Fyone]

Who cares about edits, Lad likes Bomb Man and that's that. He wanted to make a skin which suited him and on that suited Bomb Man, what's wrong with that. And the quality of the skin is great, maybe if anything a bit too much colours.

[Korby]

How do I put this...
Oh, I know!

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To go into further detail, the palette sucks. It literally looks like you grabbed a ton of random colors, threw them onto Bombman, then released it.
In terms of rotations, you have inaccuracies on the jetpack in pretty much every rotation, the yellow x thing on his back is a different size on his Back/R than it is on his Back and it also has a black pixel in it, the yellow and red breastlights move up and down in his front/r, front, and side poses, as well as the grey...stomach beard from the front and front/r. His dark red face extends a pixel up in his side pose, and the "shading" and "highlighting" you did is fugly. There's also a black line that goes across his chest that likes to appear sometimes.
The designs, and by designs I mean the blue and cyan diagonal lines that are literally everywhere, look bad and clutter up the piece. The colors you chose look terrible with pretty much every weapon combination, ESPECIALLY Skull Barrier.

Also, a design tip, don't rely so much white near a cyan part on a skin, because it'll rarely exist considering at least half the weapons in the game have white as their cyan color.



My suggestion is to make the design further away from Bomb Man and make it look better.

[Clayton]

My suggestion is to make the design further away from Bomb Man and make it look better.

But i like bombman........

But I understand your perspective but other people perspectives are different. To me, the skin fully emulates Supahlad (mostly because of his bombman like body) and makes me have that feel of me playing like Supahlad.

Thanks for your comments Korby I will keep them in mind. But remeber "Another person's trash is another person's treasure".

[Korby]

Why don't you go post Supahlad on a community like Spriters Resource or Sprites Inc? That way you can get better tips than the ones I gave you.

[Red]

you could always try to make him look like a... er... bomb man 2.0, but not just being an edit of bombman with that... "face"

[Gumballtoid]

i suggest giving him an actual weapon, like knight man's mace, or enker's spear
he'll at least have some originality that way

[Clayton]

i suggest giving him an actual weapon, like knight man's mace, or enker's spear
he'll at least have some originality that way

didn't you guys see his special powerful wand-like thingy (bomblauncher to be exact)

[TheDoc]

didn't you guys see his special powerful wand-like thingy (bomblauncher to be exact)

Ummm......no?

[Clayton]

Ok, i made the jet skin. It`s up for download and fixed the orignal skin`s sounds. See in the beginning post

[Korby]

Congratulations, you managed to make it worse.